Forever You

Forever You

A Story by Fahmida Mehreen

After days of tantalizing waiting, one day the impatience came to an end. The Supreme Guide woke me up to a dream; a gift of a lifetime. I decided to name it “you”.


Day after day, the earnest prayers played on. And then when at last the prayers crossed the horizon, you walked through. In all your majesty.


In you I found my ultimate companion. Within you I have installed my world. You are my colorful spring. You are my southern summer breeze. You are my orange crunchy fall. You are my snowflakes winter. You are my enigmatic day and my dreamy night. You are my time. My seconds tick with the beat of your heart.


You are the best of me. Anything but you is nothing just like a tiny poof of white sand on Caribbean beach.

You are my sky and you are my soul now. Nothing can go wrong here on. Past is in the past. Future is yet a dream. Present is where you and I are. And this is where we shall remain.


Because as long as we are in each other’s embrace, each moment will roll over the past and roll on to the future, leaving us in present.


My love for you is not big. It is not perfect. It is not flattering. It is not colorful.

But my love for you is intense. It is crazy. It is true. It is pure.


You are the biggest truth of my existence. Your companionship is my precious identity.


You. You. Forever you.

 

© 2017 Fahmida Mehreen


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This piece evokes strong feelings of warmth, Fahmida. In my mind, I believe that there is nothing more unwavering and powerful than a woman's heart awakened to reveal all of its jewels. A piece like this, it justifies my believing that way.

This was awesome. This was love. Great to pop in and read one of your raw, real writings again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. I have become less frequent with writing. But such reviews and encourageme.. read more



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This piece evokes strong feelings of warmth, Fahmida. In my mind, I believe that there is nothing more unwavering and powerful than a woman's heart awakened to reveal all of its jewels. A piece like this, it justifies my believing that way.

This was awesome. This was love. Great to pop in and read one of your raw, real writings again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. I have become less frequent with writing. But such reviews and encourageme.. read more
My love for you is not big. It is not perfect. It is not flattering. It is not colorful.
But my love for you is intense. It is crazy. It is true. It is pure.

very beautifully expressed Fahmida..as usual you write with lot of emotions and the happiness of finding the one is flowing through this creation of yours..

nicely done , i enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. Indeed, these feelings are precious. :)
This divine story unfolds with such beauty, such tenderness, such wild wonder, dear Fahmida. How wondrous to have the glory of heaven guiding your steps, opening doors of life and love. Looking into the past, then turning into the radiance of this dream awakening. This lifts the soul into the sky.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

6 Years Ago

Your review is truly uplifting and encouraging. Thank you so much! Such emotions are inexpressible. .. read more
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

I am so glad your soul is filled with words, Fahmida, and that you choose to share them with us. :)
Wow!!
I loved the intensity with with which you wrote.
Good use of expressions indeed.
The third para truly stands out for its intensity and beauty.
My first read after a long break surely amazed me:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Neetha. Glad that it appealed to you. :)

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Added on September 9, 2017
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Fahmida Mehreen
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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