Bri

Bri

A Poem by Faith Knoll
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In dedication to my best friend

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She has a heart of gold
But bitterness made her cold
I never wanted it to be this way
But you don't see the outcome 
Until after all of your mistakes
There's no rewind
Can't go back in time
But if I could, I'd give you a second childhood
I'd do so much different
If I was wise when I was young
Maybe I wouldn't be sitting here, writing past my tear
Maybe we'd be closer as years grew us older 
Maybe it's too late to make up
For past mistakes
But I can promise you 
I won't treat you like I used to
I won't make the same mistakes
Bri, my heart aches and breaks 
I was once as venomous to you as a snake
Seven years old, trapped in a war zone
You never should have had to take bullets
Now I'm the one who lays awake 
Waiting for daybreak to ease my heartache

© 2018 Faith Knoll



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WOW! this is so good and outpouring of emotions. enjoyed

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Faith Knoll

5 Months Ago

Thank you hun :)
very well done, it tells an amazing story about friendship, great job :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Faith Knoll

8 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Justin

8 Months Ago

your welcome, if u get a second, would you please check out my writing thanks :)
a hard awakening to live with... you set the vision well.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Faith Knoll

8 Months Ago

Thank you!
Past regrets suck - but can teach us lessons for today and commit vows to keep tomorrow. The key is - forgiveness! Poetically penned piece of confessions and emotions - good share ... :-)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Faith Knoll

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much :) I don't really like this one as much. I think it's choppy and has no theme but I d.. read more
these are fast, scrambled thoughts. I don't it doesn't flow in certain spots and the rhyme is kinda off. But what do you think..?

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on September 11, 2017
Last Updated on April 26, 2018

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Faith Knoll
Faith Knoll

Denver, CO



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