winter.wonderland.

my head resting on your leg

your hand stroking my hair

the white snow falling outside

creating a winter wonderland

your eyes are locked with mine

your gaze melting my heart

the fire crackles in the hearth

the warmth flowing over both of us

you stand up

take a hold of my hand

gently put on my coat

kiss my forehead 

you lead me outside

into the winter wonderland

the snow is still falling

drifting slowly to the ground

you grasp my waist

lift me up

twirl me around

laughter escapes my lips

you stop spinning

pull my lips towards yours

plant a soft promise on it

and embrace me

 

we stand outside

In this winter wonderland

as the fire crackles

snow drifting to the ground

 

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was sweet and very well-written. I enjoyed the way you played with the idea of a lover who wants to dance in the snow. The imagery was beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I hope to keep the winter wonderland at a distance for a while. Need a few warm days. The poem is very good. I like the description and hope in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[mi-chan]

beautiful description! loved it ^^

[M Garcia]

Wonderful images.

[Damon Favreau]

Such a wonderful romantic image...I love it :)

[Matt Shriver]

So beautiful. I loved this poem. It was so well done. Thank you for sharing it.

[Fontane Wong]

My attention is totally drawn to this poem, I can't drawn my attention back, this is such a beautiful poem! A charming image swam into my view when I'm reading it. The scale and the formats are well planned, it follows step by step, just like staircase. A really beautiful poem!(Even perfect! :) )

[CharlesMonroe]

This is beautiful (: I love the images it creates. The formats beautiful to, very good job (:
100/100

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A seasonal and dogmatic prose that fills the reader to no end, well done

[Hatchling]

I love this :D