Stupidly Standing Strong

i was angry....

You think

You are everything....

God

Amazing

That everyone should

bow before you

For they aren't worthy

Of your grace

You think you rule everything...

 

It's funny

Or at least

I think so

How you stand

So confident

Knowing you have no one

Yet thinking you rule it all anyway

 

You want things

When you want it

How you want it

Ordering people around

Getting what you want

I'm not like them

I only let you talk

But that doesn't mean

I'll listen

 

You treat everyone like garbage

And maybe thats why

You have no one

That's why

They say horrible things

When you turn around

 

You stand strong

And confident

Overly so

In a place

Where you have no one

That will be your demise

That will lead to your fall....

 

You still stand strong....

 

 

Reviews

[Carmalou]

Very good, you got across the idea very well. My only suggestion would be in the third stanza,
'I only let you talk
But that doesn't mean
I'll listen.'
I suggest removing the word only. I just think it would flow better.
But other than that it was very good.

[brittneymarie]

Nicely done peice :]
I like when someone writes through there anger/emotions and you really showed it

Great job