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I love to sing lalala Dead corpse song

I love to sing lalala Dead corpse song

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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Ever wanna just kill someone...

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I love to sing lalala dead corpse song.
Youll love to sing it soon enough.
Youll die.
Life goes on for others, cuz nobody likes you.
You will die..
You will die.
Everybody be happy.
I be happy.
I pluck your eyes out .
Your screams of agony will be my music box.
Blood everywhere will be grand.
One of the grandest things.
Cut the flesh and make it bleed.
All your crying did no good.
I hate you.
I hate you.
forver more.
I want to kill you myself.
I fantasize of such things, divine.


© 2010 Fanciful Goddess



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Good job! Let me know if you need help with your soul; I'm up for anything with death lol

Posted 5 Years Ago


lol... i can imagine this being sang in a cheerful almost kiddy tone while the person singing is tearing apart his or her (for some reason my mind says it is a her) prey

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I shivered. Such hatred, such strong animosity...I can understand the hate. Wonderful

Posted 7 Years Ago


oo i like this one! it flowed nicely, and i like the dark contrast between the cheerful, happiness the speaker finds at these horrific murderings... great job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Interesting and dark poem! I love it! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago



it was really dark and gothic.
good job :]

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is great! It's really dark, but at the same time really intrigueing.... Is that how u spell it?

Posted 7 Years Ago


A dark poem but an intriguing one. Shows how people sometimes experience bloodlust all of a sudden for no specific reason.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very interesting piece of writing. It had nice flow.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 19, 2010
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Fanciful Goddess
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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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