Memorable Days

Memorable Days

A Poem by Cerise
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The most amazing and memorable days of my life in school with my best friends...

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My friends you are my blanket during the winter
You are my ice cubes during summer
Someday when I am alone
I think of all those days gone

Since I keep thinking of those lovely days
They seem like those bright sun rays
Those days I shall treasure
Be it today or forever
Just call on me when in need
You can call me selfish, or it might just be my greed
My life shall be your's ever
I shall not forget you ..nahh...never..

Love for me is you all
Without whom I am sure to fall
Support me through my lonely days
Help me through my naughty ways
I shall be your's now and then
Never ask when
For you know am your's only lady like friend...:)

© 2012 Cerise



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wow, what a nice writin' again...you know what i read yours one after a lon' time...it's nice poem....this;s all about frnds, how you enjoyed with 'em, how you played with 'em, how you spent your every individual time with 'em, how you were their frnds...what a lovely write, you know what you really memorized my those days.......
now plz...don't continue it or else i'm gonna b emotional ....lol

this's a well written piece, the most effective n efficient line that gets entered into my heart is
"I shall be your's now and then
Never ask when
For you know am your's only lady like friend "

what a nice stanza "fancy'', thanks to share such a piece on here with us...especially with me...lol.
lovely write....you did what you wanted to write.....
great job by you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

heheheheh...Thank you.....this is one of my oldest poems...written loong ago..it myt nt make much se.. read more
Criss ;)

4 Years Ago

yeah, i did figure it out.....it's a copyright of 2012, but i liked it, yeah i know it doesn't make .. read more
Cerise

4 Years Ago

aww..Thank u for being soo understnding...thats very sweet of ya..:)
Very lovely poem... A perfect gift to a friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)
Dee Okolotowicz

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I'm just beginning to try poetry. I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing ye.. read more
Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words..am glad u hav thought of giving it a try...goodluck with it...am sure.. read more
So so so beautiful !!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

4 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I really like the ebb and flow of the words in this poem! It reminds me of sitting on the shoreline and watching the waves, surrounded by friends! Such a nice picture! Great writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cerise

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts..:)
i really liked this. the comparison between friends and blankets during winter and ice cubes during summer was really cute and added a nice touch to the poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words..:)
Lovely sentiment...beautiful....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words..:)
lovely

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thankyou..:)
 Soul Fire

5 Years Ago

np
great work enjoyed it all and the message of friendship

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Aww..Thankyou...:D
I like it a lot! I love friends, and this a very postive poem about them. Great work! :)

Starr

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thankyou...:D
A very nice poem of friendship. Good to spend time with friends. Laughter and long talks are needed in a life. Thank you for sharing the positive poem of friendship.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thankyou ..:D

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Added on August 28, 2012
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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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