Mamma mia...Angel in disguise

a poem on mother

 

 Angel you are and you will forever be

Your magical feathery touch
And mouth-watering dishes much
From our birth to your death 
Loved you we did, with all our heart
For you are our very breath

Love us you will 
Wipe our tears before eye's fill
Paradise lies at your feet
That is what god has decreed

You were love at first sight
Cuddling and caring
Stories of prince
In lullabyies you would convince

Bathing, cleaning and keeping us neat
Loving, caring, and tickling our feet
The ever-flowing love in your twinkling eyes 
The glow on your stunning smiling face
Your soft and soothing gown with a wonderful lace

Everything is a show
Nothing is going to be same tomorrow
Every new day you get older
But still breath-taking and beautiful
Your only fear is for one's near to heart
For you know one day you will depart

Life did not give you much 
Few bits of happiness and tons of pain
For being, a homemaker was a special task
You were strong so you put a great mask

Life to you 
Were moppet and munchkin
Yelling but still loving
Never did you say you were tired 
I without doubt admired
You never gave even a tiny cry
For you hid your tears 
But yours cheeks never dry

Value you we did
However, we were just stupid
I for one was a very naughty kid
There was never a huff
For all the troublesome and irritating things
After all, we were your darlings
We ask your forgiveness
For you are our richness

You are our life
Our reason of being
A great wonderful wife
We wish for your well-being
Our debt to you can never be paid
For you gave us too much 
For us to repay
Prayer and smile 
Safety and love
Good wishes for you my beloved
Mamma mia..My mother

Author's Note

Mamma mia means my mother..:)..please review and let me know what you think of it..thankyou..:D

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

This is a sweet tribut to your mother, ut some of the rhymes feel a bit forced. Poems don't have to have a rhyming sequence. a good write.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Trigorin]

Not bad. There's obviously a lot of emotion behind this piece and you've definitely captured that. Some parts seem to get a little repetitive at times but that's still a very minor issue. Well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Areeba]

I love it so much, it's wonderful!

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Emily]

Very nice. Has your mother read this? Keep writing.

[Cerise]

Thank you.no she didnt read it..No one noes i write poems..:)

[Shay]

aww heart touching and really good, thanks for sharing.. i enjoyed it alot

[Cerise]

Awww...Thank you for your kind words..:)

[ShadowFaux]

I wish i had a mother like that.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou..:)

[RachelReaper]

aw, this poem was sweet, it really gave us a sense of how much love you hold for your mother. the third paragraph was my favorite.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou so mcuh for your kind words..am glad you liked it..:)

[Pax]

beautifully written...enjoyed it. nice work my friend.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:)

[That_Guy]

I'm so looking forward to seeing my Mum on Sunday now :)

[Cerise]

Aww....:)..am glad for ya

[That_Guy]

that and Football ;) heh

[Cerise]

lolz..:P

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, I think you done an excellent job writing and conveying your feelings about your mother. I think it's amazing to watch as people, like you, write such beautiful and inspiring poetry about their family. A mother does so much to keep their family in line, and they should be appreciated and recognized more than "Mother's Day". Don't you agree? I love my mother even though she might not get told enough, my mistake. This is a great tribute to your mother and I hope she read it at some point. Outstanding job, I can't wait to read more from you too! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Cerise]

i compltly agree with you..,..Awww..thankyou soo much for such kind words..your words made my day..:D....

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I'm glad that my words made your day! :) Anytime you need something read or reviewed, send it to me :)

[Cerise]

ahh mayn thankyou....your words get a smile ouuta me..:P....sure

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha, you're welcome :) and I'm glad. Haha :D