Road trip from Love to Heaven

a poem about a girl dreaming of her future with the boy she loves..:)

Once I had been to the pond of love

Dabbling and smoothing, 

My angels soft wings

Come from yonder, far above

He was my shining star

Come to save me on a dark night 

From the torment and pain

In an ostentatious little car

And that day shall not be very far

When we shall live in our sweet little world

Love and passion curled

When the morning rays will flow through

And I would wake you with my fresh morning dew

Wake you up on a bright new day

Give you a kiss before you go to work

Hoping you come without any more delay

I will dress up and put on a huge bright smile

I will cook for you and wait a while

Every day will be worthwhile

We are to be couples for life long

I promise to keep you smiling and happy

Till my breath leaves, my body and is gone

You can be strong, listen to our song

Till we unite again and move on

To the palace in paradise where we belong…..

Author's Note

Let me know how you felt...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

A nice Oasis ,but life is full of mountains,rocks,dust, and bad burgers.as the mexican slowed his car ,rolled down the window, 102 plus me rope in hand chasing a old goat,
the mexican slowed to say"GooooD Luck" just before he drove away.

[Cerise]

lolz...well said..thankyou

[TPK Stories]

Powerful...a love worth waiting for....

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Passionate, loving piece. Great emotions in every line. Nicely done.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for such kind words...:)

[T. Logan]

I love the rhyming in this. Really good!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Stanley Wilson]

very emotive lovely work

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[Starr Mist]

I love it! I wish there was someone I could feel this way about, but this keeps me hopeful for sure! Thank you!

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou so much..D

[Mark]

Wistful, and old school in it's assumptions. Reminded me a little of the old family TV shows "Father Knows Best" "Leave It To Beaver"... a hope for love, to be a couple, to be fulfilled by joining.

You used couples, where you seem to be talking about only two people which would be a couple. Just my two cents :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful opinion..:D

[Eve]

I felt, hopeful, a dream all hopeful lovers dream.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive emotion and the desire in this poem. Good to swim in love and desire to find peace in paradise. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful review..:D

[afra]

wow ....such a lovely write ....i love it ....well done

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D