THE KISS OF LIFE

A story of two people and the way destiny plays its games

 

Nights rose with gleaming starlight

Days begun from zenith height

The sun dazzled bright showing its rays

The moon so bright shining unfazed its way

Love had started roaming the earth

Before time could pass, Hate showed its worth

A Boy was born with riches and wonders

And a Girl lived On ragged clothes

Similar was the Nature of their birth

And similar would be the way they die

Moved from time To time,

One in search of Survival another for Gain

Changed into an Adult with looks and brain

He became Gentlemen and Lady she became

Destiny played It's naughty tricks once again

Sparks ignited, When their gazes held

Staring deep searching into the soul

Unknown about the Tortures of life

They gave way in Love unknown to the spice

And like always just when everything was calm

Life gave a Tumble and whoop came a storm

Out came the Truth, beggar she was

Hurt and betrayal came with the flaws

Desperate to move, They separated their ways

Ages passed when Life tried a spell

In front they Stood, It was worse than hell

The past and Present rotated around

Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain

After few efforts The hero forgave

Love ruled them Once again

Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice

Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

Author's Note

Just something came out of know where..it was more like the world started with the start of night and day...and how love and truth came..how men nd women came into being..and a love story between them born..the way destiny plays its game...the way hurt,betrayal and pain rules life..And whatever happens in the end the soul mate would help you live through it..:)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

although it should be....sometimes love just isn't enough. i think we have become jaded to greed and comforts and specialized living and that detracts from the basis of a loving relationship. the human race has its priorities mixed up and has forgotten some of the most important values. this write is awesome. it fully orchestrates the circle of life and the karmic wheel...well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words...what you said is true..i guess we all take it for granted...

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read....you're welcome

[Holly Mason]

really enjoyed reading thank you

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words:)

[DIVYA]

A very sweet and romantic tale.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[xxxHailieyxxx]

a tad bit hard to take in but thats one of the main things i like about it! that means your good with your words and thats a very useful skill!

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful words hailiey..:)

[xxxHailieyxxx]

your welcome :D

[Dominique]

Hmm, well it was good. Some parts I did not understand but I kinda liked the story about the rich man falling in love with the beggar.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Dominique]

Your welcome.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

A wonderful journey of two lives, intertwined. Enjoyed. Great write.
~pat

[Cerise]

Thank you.:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

nice writing

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

It is my pleasure and I think that this one actually deserves a more elaborate appraisal; I think that this is a brillaintly written, striking poem, very well done

[Cerise]

Your words definetly made my day..Thank you for your kind words..:)

[stars are far]

that is so nice

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Tarry Franck]

You did this so gracefully! Love when poems come together like that~~just floats down on paper. Great job

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

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cool fella.....i've no word's to say.......very nice.....

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you..:)

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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. i'm back after a long days...you'r wel...+wel ...= welcome.........you pretty...............

[Cerise]

Well welcome bak..:)...lol its jus a google pic...i liked it too..so thought will put it..:P

[under-the-water]

this radiates beauty. no like honestly this is soo good! you are tracing a picture of an image in your head with words. i can see it - youve done such a great job!
what a beauty.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you soo much for your wonderful words..:)