An Internal Battle

An Internal Battle

A Poem by Cerise

Whenever I am provoked or angery

Its an internal battle of world war 3

It all depends on the sands of time

One of you must either win or die

Either my throbbing heart of fire or

My common sense dipped in kind....


MY HURT-

When my hurt is multiplied

I see blood red through my eye

Every emotion of hurt is high

I live to kill and all I see is evil

The raw feelings full of havoc

Untl I bleed and the hurt flows

Through tears of despair....


MY PEACE-

When I get the chance to kill my hurt

And let the goodness win within

I loose a teeny tiny little part of me

And a little some more gets burned

I paste my lips together in fear 

And fill my heart with love.....


For once the tongue wages 

I will loose all I have 

My love, blood relations and life.....

© 2015 Cerise


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The ever present struggle between our two sides.. quite a battle you have written

Posted 8 Years Ago


life's struggle between anger and peace...well written Cerise...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh, it's quite painful, very emotional enrichment of words you seem to be bled with! Every single word that you've written across's... just a drop of your tears which belong to your own fleecy spirit beloved by some internal battle of world war-3. You're very good at writing dark stuffs... you ain't just write but relinquish yourself to darkness. It's all proven by your insightful & so evocative pieces. Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


love this so much thanks for sharing..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

Thank you....:)
This is so true but painful yet still beautiful...pain because this is a reacurring feeling ive come to know rather well...
Well done !:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

Thank you so mch..:)
very well expressed hun i can sense the raw emotion right through the words,,keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

Thaaaank you sooo mch...
it is time to learn from the time that has proceeded our current place in history.
We are supposed to be smart yet we keep rerpeating the same history. Some one,some town , some nation has to change the course of history.I am certain it starts with the 1 thing..........love

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Well said..I agree with you...Thank you for your review...:)
Love's a creator of blood-relations. Love's itself a 'destroyer' of blood-relations. Love's a reason of world-wars... love becomes a cause to 'lover-wars'. The concept you arouse with the flicker of devastated heart creates a very vivid imagery across your poetic-words. Nice flow of ink as usual.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Neon

9 Years Ago

Am I? Hell, what more INTENSIVE thing I have to do which`s not forgiven?
Hey you white cheek.. read more
Neon

9 Years Ago

Okay... fine. No need to get stressed. Lol
Cerise

9 Years Ago

-_-.........
The conflicts and emotions are explained very well here, with good flow and great selection of words. Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thank you for kind words...:)
Yup that's true, you nailed it with this one FF. Good one ........... liked it v much.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Cerise

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