Waters Forever

Waters Forever

A Poem by fatalsymphonies

I held what I held dearly, closely to my heart,
Like beauty at my eyes and scarlet lashes,
Dewed from the drops of blood.
He said, "You mustn't jump,
I beg of you not."
I said, "I will, I will,
you watch."
He held me closely to his chest with warmth
while he said back to me,
He said, "I beg you, I beg you not,
But dear, follow you,
I shall not."

© 2011 fatalsymphonies


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Very sad. It almost has a hopeful ending. Its a very good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


So sad and yet he is wise, perhaps giving a bit of hope. Well written in so few words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice. sad but romantically so.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nothing to say except fantastic write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Saved from the edge, good poem my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This shows the difference between the two so clearly..one willing to jump the other saying I won't ... I like the way you ended it that way.. Great write..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sad but well expressed..

Posted 13 Years Ago


brought tears to my eyes, marvelous write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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