Weaving a circle

Weaving a circle

A Poem by fattycbreezy52


Unwrinkled feet,
Tapping the verdant lawn.
Mellow hands,
Depicting a strong bond.
Saccharine laughter,
Filling the air with euphony.
Every circle,not just a play.
Every round,not just a gambol.
Every turn,
Clockwise or anti-clockwise,
Strengthening the pledge of sisterhood.
Taking the implication of "friend circle"
Literally and seriously.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52



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You combine such wonderful pictures with lovely poetry. This is flowing, melodic verse with an air of mystique and fairytale to it. Wonderfully told.

Posted 2 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

Yes,art has become a sort of passion .Thanks a lot:)
Beautiful artwork and description. You took the reader to good places and you left them with positive thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

thanks Coy:)Glad I could do that!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
such a beautifully poetic description of 'weaving a circle' of friendship... the imagery dances off the screen as does the strength of friendship bonds, no matter the direction in which they move... nice work, FCB, with words and image...

Posted 2 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

thanks again for such amazing comments.Gives me immense joy:)
Hey my sista from another mista - I like this one. An honage to solidarity and a celebration of womanhood.
Smashing phrasing - loved that word choice 'euphony' - class
The imagery is hypnotic.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

Thanks Anto:) I am glad! :)
Well penned!
I am positive that the ladies of WC are going to eat this piece up!
Well written and delivered!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

2 Years Ago

Haha I hope they do it at a relaxed and slow pace. Thanks James for an amazing review:)

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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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