Just once

Just once

A Poem by fattycbreezy52

Just for once,
Open your eyes and see the truth.
Even closed eyes are capable
of seeing big castles
and coins of gold

© 2016 fattycbreezy52



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Logical wisdom in the poetry. Most people in the new generations. Survive with eyes closed. This is sad. We need to open our eyes and know the truth. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Unfortunately some never see the truth. The real beauty is not what's seen but what's felt.
This is a beautiful, deep, write, and I cannot wait to read more from you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot Traci...You are amazing:)
The brevity of this is what speaks to me the most.

Posted 1 Year Ago


fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot :)
Some people refuse to see the truth even when it is doing a fan dance in front of them. Good one. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

True...thank you :)
There is none so blind as those who would not see.

Beautiful poetry. Deep truth.

Posted 1 Year Ago


fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

Thanks buddy...it's great to see you after a long time:)
Such few lines carrying such a weighty message and that too in a beautiful manner. You are amazing as ever. More than ever actually. Keep the excellent work going! All the best! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

Thanks love...You are my strength:)❤

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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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