Legit?

Legit?

A Poem by fattycbreezy52


May be the stars look at us
and see us shining too!

© 2016 fattycbreezy52



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That's a nice thought. I wonder if they can see the good people brighter than the bad ones.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gray

1 Year Ago

Haha, got ya. In order for me to talk to you, the signal has to go into space, doesn't it? lol :p
fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

Not really...I can very much hear you even while on earth:P
Anyway, that's so sweet of you;):.. read more
fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

A good star*
May be.... all one word 'maybe'..... or put an "it" in front of it. It may be....

Honestly, this doesn't work very well as a stand alone. You should flesh it out a bit. It's got a good start all ready to go.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Reclaimed

1 Year Ago

You really should put an "it" in from of "may be". Your responses were very pretentious. Are you o.. read more
fattycbreezy52

1 Year Ago

You know what?
Thank you..This shows the s**t which writers like you have in their hearts...A.. read more
Pete

11 Months Ago

That's a beautiful thought. Very creative and deep. Thought provoking. Nice.

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Added on October 7, 2016
Last Updated on October 7, 2016

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fattycbreezy52
fattycbreezy52

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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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