Fantasy World.

Fantasy World.

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!
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Just a light read, you'll see.

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" Where the princesses dance,
                     & where the fairies twirl.
                              Where anything happens;
                            Fantasy World "

    The peaceful dark this evening,
Is free of any fright.
For the brave bright stars kiss,
The wide open sky tonight.

The warm wind sweeps,
Over the smooth grass land.
The graceful waves curl,
Over the white fine sand.

The gray wolves cry,
Out in song to eachother.
The melodies flow,
Across the island & linger.

The meadow fresh; delightful,
Belonging only to the mind of one man.
The world here is beautiful.
In Imagination Land.


© 2009 Fear Corrupts!



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Majestic, this is so enchanting and magical. You brought a whole world to life with beautiful visual discriptions :-). I would love to live in this world, everything in this poem was magical, i loved it :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice attempt Rhyme scheme is a little off and unmetered but I enjoyed

Posted 8 Years Ago


simply brilliant i love the description throughout this piece very calming as if you can reach out and touch the grass or the sand... wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pretty.
Short & sweet, yet enough to capture my attention though.
I likey.

xoxoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful piece of poetic prosean enjotable read

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very beautifully written. I loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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