A Longing to Breath

A Longing to Breath

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

 

A Longing to Breath.

 

But a wave of fresh air, can surely entice the mind.

The taste of sweet breeze, and a feeling devine.

Something new, something rare, of triggering interest.

Of wanting, of desire, of experiencing the best.

The lingering remains, presses longingness for more.

A feeling of need, deep down in the core.

Light as can be, though bearing the touch of the deep.

Oh this wave of fresh air, I so wish I could breath.

 

 

 

 

 


© 2009 Fear Corrupts!



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The poem is full of air! So, those who feel claustrophic without any love in lives, are please advised to come and read it. It is full of real anecdotes stated in verses.

Liked it a lot.

Thanks.

Raja

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very good vivid ..waiting on that deep breath of something new.. or maybe at the top of a rollercoaster..excited holding your breath.. that is how this poems feels

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow, very nice. powerful, creative, beautiful. well written with a smooth tho fast paced tempo, perfect for rather strong and vivid message/image this piece portrays.

well done indeed. very talented

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very few poems that are written with few lines packs a power such as this one does. Great poem. The layout is even cool. Thanks for requesting that I read this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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WOW! This poem is great! I really like th flow and the rhyming. You write very well and I love the imagery. Great poem! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 29, 2009
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Fear Corrupts!
Fear Corrupts!

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