Disabled "human" mind

Disabled "human" mind

A Poem by wafa
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just a thought...

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It is just a thought ,I feel surprised

Our human mind is smart, genuis and brightened 

How it comes

Our mind our human pride

that discovered the atomic bomb

Nuclear, electricity and Egyptian tombs

The gravity the relativity

and more and more theories

Internet iopd and ipad


How it comes

Our human mind that discovered

all statistics ,physics and mathematics

finance and economics

has failed…


in finding a resolution

in discovering a solution

to a conflict between two brothers

having the same blood the same mother the same father

to a dispute between two neighbors

separated by a wall

just needing a human call


Have we failed?

does our mind become disabled

is it dead?

Who said our human mind has no limits

seems it has a limit

All our negotiation theories have failed

with all our savvy our creativity

we were disabled

to find a way…


Generations and generations come

pretending “ yes we can”

making promises similar to castles sand

words taken by the wind

is it the most complicated problem

is it the impossible mission

is it our malediction

is it that land destiny

is it a divine mystery

is finding the solution

will be the end?

I don’t like ends

But if it is necessary

Let’s make an end

just let me try


I confess I’m not the best

I’m a simple mind

I have never been good in all your “ ics”

I get sick I have a feelings mix

I don’t need a nobel prize

I don’t want to be called “ savor”

I just want to save my humanity

I won’t call it … neither ….

It is a nameless land with no flag with no sign

It is nobody land

It is a free land

It is always in our mind

Cause it is our failure

That miracle solution nobody find

It is our shame

For you and me it is the same

With all sins we make

With that blood lake


I am just wondering If …

If we just forget about interests

Gold, petrol and debts

Politics and economics

If we just truly love the land

If we just really care about peace

If we just sincerely shake hands

If we just look at our children eyes

Think about them as a heart piece

How can we teach innocence hate

How can we be happy when a human is humiliated

How can we be happy when a human is mutilated


Look at this bee saving its injured sister from our feet

Look at this bird concentrated on building together that seat 

Look at this camel we try to hide his head

To not see his brother dead

Look at all those elephants together

Trying to help their brother

It is a reality

It is a natural instinct


Look at me and you

Look at our reality

Where is our humanity

does our mind become disabled

We can no more think

Does our conscience vanished

We can no more get guilt

Is our heart dead

We can no more feel sad

We can no more get tears

Seeing that child tears

Did we loose our mind

We are no more human kind

Did we loose our humanity

Living in a world of insanity


Just look into my eyes

And tell me…

“ would you feel better if I die”

If you see my blood into your eye

If yes, please kill me and never ask Why…

© 2011 wafa


Author's Note

wafa
special thanks to Russel "sweet & tender Hooligan"...your writings really touched me;;;

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I do think our culture disables most of us from becoming our real self. There is a lot to think about in this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this - it has so much expression and discusses the real values and what is really important. Overall, it is a true representation of what the world has become.

The mind has been taken over by the power of technology, thinking has been taken over by the easy gadgets and machines, the world has been taken over by a fight for money and power, the earth is not what it use to be, neither are people like you and me. It is all just a game... life and death, people treat every thing the same, except for each other and it is just so lame!

Well written piece.
You might enjoy a poem from my collection called 'In Our Twenty-First Century: The Harsh Reality of Our Wonderland Glory'. Do read it if you get the chance.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2011
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wafa
wafa

tunis, Tunisia



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