Candice Coates

I would have married you...

CC...

on the night of my content

to me a dream was sent

at time of love and cheer

dinners  homemade with wine and beer

I felt my heart warm and bright

I saw her in my arms within my sight

the one I truly long for

the woman I adore

there she was in my dream

so beautiful oh what a dream

together in happiness and in love

she was an angel from above

I awoke somewhat at dismay

on my lips nothing to say

in my mind still there she was in my dream

so lovely did i love her oh what a dream

Author's Note

This is a sonnet I wrote about a time when I came close to meeting the ONE...

Reviews

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Ferous, I know you are thinking of meeting the ONE, but there might be a bit of work before you get there. You will definitely have to meet TWO, THREE, and likely FOUR before you make a decision.

Love can be and should be considered one of the most unpredictable emotions around and available. Also realize beauty in itself is skin deep. As I tell others, good looks are fine and they may get you far in your first 10-15 years of life, but after that you'll need better tricks up your sleeve, and that goes for both sexes. :)

Best wishes and fond regards finding Lady Love ...

[ferousfinite]

Fiction based on fact yes but carefully constructed into art...

[dw817]

And perhaps art, sealing and forming the heart between two lovers. :)
http://bit.ly/1bnHtBlread moreAnd perhaps art, sealing and forming the heart between two lovers. :)
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[ferousfinite]

This piece is about meeting what you think you want versus what you really need.

[J. Hampton]

pretty piece....all the markings of as it should be

[MsJewel]

A beautiful dream even if she wasn't the one. I hope you find the love you are looking for. Your poem is lovely and heartfelt.

:) Julie

[Wohlfy]

Really beautiful poem, in love from start to finish

[Neon]

Very beautiful sonnet. I loved the rhyme... and the theme's so good, even am still screaming this great sonnet in my mind. Hey, me too'd love to write sonnets .. but i don't know how to write, if you don't mind then would you love to tell me how to write sonnets?

[ferousfinite]

Imagine Shakespeare mixed with Chris Botti.

Take this lesson and write notes:
read moreImagine Shakespeare mixed with Chris Botti.

Take this lesson and write notes:

https://thepoeticvegetablegarden.wordpress.com/article/how-to-write-a-shakespearean-sonnet-oyn3gsblqnhx-12/

[ferousfinite]

I added two lines because I can lol