EPIDEMIC!

EPIDEMIC!

A Poem by Jane Doe
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PROMPT CHOICE 1 What if humanity ended with an epidemic virus? Would people hide from each other for their own safety? by-Sweets

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Epidemic

 

Spreading through the air,

Spreading through the ground,

Filling my lungs damaging my hair,

Dead ones getting eaten by hounds.

 

People stuffed in the boxes,

Rooms, closets, pantrys too,

Getting sniffed out by foxes,

To get terrorized like me and like you.

 

Many in beds dying in their sleep,

Others laying restless in the streets,

Some sleeping in jeeps,

Where humans use to meet now only epidemics are born and created by heat.

 

Spreading through the air,

Spreading through the ground,

Filling my lungs damaging my hair,

Dead ones getting eaten by hounds.

 

 

© 2010 Jane Doe


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I am surprised that such a colorful poem on this subject is coming from a mere teen.
Not a dis, I am impressed that you are aware of what is in your environment aside from the usual material crap that kids seem so focused on.

Chem Trails. google it.
You will have something interesting to talk to your friends about, and you will be acting as a Citizen.

Abbigale is Wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I am surprised that such a colorful poem on this subject is coming from a mere teen.
Not a dis, I am impressed that you are aware of what is in your environment aside from the usual material crap that kids seem so focused on.

Chem Trails. google it.
You will have something interesting to talk to your friends about, and you will be acting as a Citizen.

Abbigale is Wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just wow! I'm in agreement with you. I can't wait to see what you come up with. It's very violent, but it words out perfectly. Keep up the great work!! I'm happy you got into the prompts, I think this is fantastic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agreed. So, sooo agreed. What is this world today? Dead people, Poverty, hungry people? Only a small amount of people are actually happy in this whole world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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