She won

She won

A Poem by Jane Doe

Together forever,

What she told you,

She left,

Then you did the stupidest thing ever.

 

You let her win,

You gave blood,

She was foolish,

But she won.

 

After you let her play you,

You cried,

You took the blade,

Then you took blood.

 

Why,

To be dramatic,

Show her how much you loved her,

She is not going to comeback to you just because you gave blood and made scars.

 

Forever,

She probaly whispered,

What you probaly replayed over AND OVER AGAIN while you sliced your arm,

All this forever and blood stuff over and over again....Don't you see a pattern?

 

Together forever,

What she told you,

She left,

Then you did the stupidest thing ever.

 

You let her win.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
NO ONE is worth YOUR blood

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yo papercuts chick:
shut up that is off ur ipd and its about tears not blood f*g


Posted 13 Years Ago


"no one is worth your blood and the one who is wouldn't make you bleed"
:)nice write abbie-kins
With lots of ninja love.
-Brookie U-da

Posted 13 Years Ago


I remember bein with you when you wrote this one...

I love u abbie!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very true, thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work.


100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2010
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