I have figured it out

I have figured it out

A Poem by Jane Doe
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I have figured it out


I've figured it out,
I'm in love,
With the thought,
Of being in love.

I have met many I really liked,
But they live so far away,
And the time zone,
I just haven't found him.

I am in love,
With the thought,
Of finding my perfect match,
I'm in love with being in love.

I want someone to hold me,
Kiss my forehead and hold my hand,
Just because they are in love,
With being in love … with me.

© 2011 Jane Doe


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I totally understand this feeling, the feeling of being in love with your thoughts on love. To think about what if must feel like to be that person, that one person that loves you for you, its easy to fall in love with that notion, that idea.
I've done it many times, thinking your in love and are not, or maybe we are? For who knows the paths of the heart but those who live within them? And since none of us but the Gods or creators live there, we will never know truly what lay within them, but only guess and assume.
So who are our neighbors to say we know not of love? That we are young and naiive?
The purest of love is that which is blissful and happy, not dark and brooding.
Continue to love the idea of love, and you will always have love with you, for without love we would be a sad sad and sorrowful world.
Peace

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is me, although Love is sometimes overrated. I think just knowing your loved, by someone, somewhere, is what its really all about. All the other stuff, is just added stuff. Peace

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it , good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I totally love this awesome piece (and the idea of loving it too:) and I can realate to your every word. I'm occasionally laden with the sentiments you express in the poem above and I totally agree with you. It's amazing how you managed to harness these thoughts and carve them into simple words in free-verse. Thumbs up Abbie.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful......just simply beautiful......

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice ............1 xoxo good

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wowww... that's a lot of reviews...you must be a really popular writer on here now.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so great! I think everyone can relate to this in one way or another... you're a good writer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand this feeling, I love being in love. I really love this poem!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Grr... Being unable to know for sure if you're really in love is just annoying. But, I don't think I know what true love is yet. It's too far off in the future. And it's not a priority. BUT, I still loved this poem! I can totally relate. Like right now, I'm in a current situation somewhat like the one you've explained here. I don't know %100 how I feel. It's nagging me and it's really annoying! Gah!
The last stanza was really cute!

"I want someone to hold me,
Kiss my forehead and hold my hand,
Just because they are in love,
With being in love ... with me."

So cuuuuute!

Love can be so confusing. It'll all straighten out in the end, though. ;) (At least I would hope so!)
You grabbed my attention from the moment I read the title - of course I'd want to know what you figured out! (I get unbelievably curious and I just must know!) You've come to a good conclusion. :3
Ah, well, I'm ranting. Nice job! Keep on writing. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is cool i totally understand this feeling. Nice Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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