I wish

A submission in a contest wat do u think????:) r & r

I wish

I wish for the wars to end,
Peace to start
For only then,
We will feel safer in our hearts.

I wish there was no poverty,
No gangs,
No drunkies running around the world will know sober,
No guns because that's what starts almost everything.

No drugs,
No murders,
Only hugs,
No freeloaders.

No restraints,
No discrimination or prejudice,
No one to fear when your going down an alley alone at night,
No one to hear all those guns loading.

No reason our world is so crazy,
It's all because of inventions,
Guns especially instead of a bullet give a daisy,
I wish there was somewhere the bad people could go like a second dimension.

Only then will the world know peace,
Only then the world will be kind and sweet,
Only then everyone will truly be a family nephew or niece,
Only then the world will be freely marching to it's own beat.

Author's Note

R&r pweeeeezzeee ??!! :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An awesome message full of wise words and, love the peaceful message, and the flow is awesome too, the final stanza is perfect to end a great poem on... so top write indeed :)