Love

Love.

So unique,
And different,
But just like the fairy tales,
Yet everything seems so vivid,so real your now a recipient.

The way she looks at him,
He looks at her,
Then they look at their child affection taking place in their every limb,
That's real love.

Not complete chaos,
Not complete perfection,
That's what love is about,
Keeping alive that strong connection.

Providing and caring for your precious family,
Never missing a day unless necessary,
Living your life happily,
Nothing can take you down for you, your under loves protection.

The strongest,
Most beautiful bond,
Yet known to mankind,
But you two will go farther then love together you will go way beyond.

May You Two Forever Be In Love.

Author's Note

Mwhahaha...sorri I'm sleep deprived for this poem ofcoursee is VERY IMPORTENT!!!
I think this is what I will read at the wedding!:)
What do you think is it suitable?!!?!?!?:) review please
Dedicated to Vanessa, Renardo, and Maliya the Lassiter family:D

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most poignant and grated piece, it reveals the synctopations of the reader to dial memory and intelligence all in one, well done, good read.

[Reverent]

In Line 4 and Line 16, switch 'your' to 'you're'.

In Line 7, 'child affection' is confusing, perhaps you meant child-like or childish.

Also, in the third stanza 'chaos' and perfection are balanced as if they were antonymous, but they are not. 'Flawed' and 'perfect' are antonyms, and also 'chaos' and 'order', but not 'chaos' and 'perfection'. To solve this, perhaps going about it in a way that doesn't lead the reader to believe that you are contrasting the two if you feel that you would like to preserve the words you have chosen.

[Larrycall]

Its really good you should read it your blessed with talent . I wish i could write as good as you . IT shows real love which is perfect for a wedding .

[Tate Morgan]

Itas very nice I have something I will send you .

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I thin this is very cool and so suitable, so all the best Abbie with reading this one out :)

[Canicus]

I love it especially this stanza

Not complete chaos,
Not complete perfection,
That's what love is about,
Keeping alive that strong connection.

that was amazing. and yeah it is suitable I hope you do well.

[Tasha]

It is very suitable. I thought it was beautiful and it will be such a wonderful present/gift. Wonderful piece.
♥ Ta'Shandra