A Face Illuminated

A Face Illuminated

A Poem by Richard McLin
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A man comes attempts to come to terms.

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You lay there with the sun on your face.

Motionless

Your hand in mine, I kiss your fingers.

Cold

I know you will soon wake in a better place.

Without Me

When I sit by you, I realize your scent still lingers.

Comforting

I raise my hand, and caress your face .

Miss You

I then close your beautiful eyes, will never open again.

End

@Richard McLin 2017



© 2017 Richard McLin



Author's Note

Richard McLin
My first poem in years. I hope you all enjoy it.

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Oh so very sad, beautifully done :) x

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The stop. Go. Stop. Go... Feel of how this was presented... I liked it. Your italicized words were like a yelled whisper punctuating each breath and line... Very well penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Richard McLin

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. It's been a rough journey trying to get back into poetry. I can't write o.. read more

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Added on April 15, 2017
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Tags: love, death, sorrow, poetry, dark, sun, reflection, light

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Richard McLin
Richard McLin

Salem, OR



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