She is

She is

A Poem by Jason
"

not a haiku

"

A dream

before

I fall asleep...

© 2008 Jason


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hmm i love this.

even though the first time i read it i read it like "she is / the dream before i fall asleep' - sort of makes 'her' more all -encompassing - not just 'a' dream but the dream, you know? gosh but that's just my opinion i hate when people re-write my s**t lmao

muah


Posted 15 Years Ago


a beautiful sentiment in a few words. Cute!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this. Its beautiful! Great Haiku!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Simple.
I like. (:

Posted 15 Years Ago


short and to the point :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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