Irises

Beauty

 

 

 

 

purple

sophisticated

bevies of haute couture-coiffure

cliques arrive

yellow, blue, peach then whites debut

all fawning in God’s sunlight

(they know)

Reviews

[Iris Jayne]

i got your mail, and i do liked it. thanks for letting me read; i especially searched it just to review. anyway, you captured the flower's beauty, both physical and divine. because of this, i came to love my name. (: i feel good about it now. it would be nice to see irises for real, you know, because ive never seen one. ): great write. thanks for inspiring people. (:

[Artiste de Mots]

Wonderful! I love your word choice! Good job! :D

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Here in this write lies the precarious balance of perfection and talent well written my friend :)

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. a big, big thank you ... yet again ... to inkcognito ... for reviewing this right now and making it visible to me ... it's a ravishing ode ... brilliant composition and rendition ...

[Inkcognito]

yes...they do "know"... simply beautiful!

[Desert Dreamer]

Your last line adds a mystical edge to your poem. The iris is a beautiful flower with the ability to live just about anywhere. Your poem makes me think that we have noticed only the outer beauty of these flowers and a more in depth observation is deserved, especially since "they know".

[Wicahpi]

This is wonderful.
Thanks for sharing with me :)

[Phibby Venable]

i have the purple sophisticated and it is my favorite..love the coiffure image,
irises are so sturdy, the best fragrance anywhere, and yet delicate..
great poem.

[Fran Marie]

Very well penned in accurate descriptives for those seeking the limelight~tho~ I find purple(my fave) to be a rather mystical/spiritual color and can be humbling of spirit and soothing to the mind~I suppose it's all one's perspective~ WeLl DonE!

[Sister Suzie]

Very nice