Selective Vision

Selective Vision

A Poem by James Paulin
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haiku

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bias perceptions

skewed views, prejudicial rules

distorted eye deals 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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I simply love the wordplay at the end of this..."eye deals" instead of ideals...it's the perspective from which we view things that often shapes our opinions and we forget to be objective and to take into account the various perceptions of others. Our "realities" may be as different as our cultures and origins. This is an excellent piece James.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I want more. It is a wonderful topic. Distorted eye deals what? Deals out the punishment onto the judged one... I totally get this one. Maybe it doesn't need more, but I want more, just the same. Good, thoughtful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I simply love the wordplay at the end of this..."eye deals" instead of ideals...it's the perspective from which we view things that often shapes our opinions and we forget to be objective and to take into account the various perceptions of others. Our "realities" may be as different as our cultures and origins. This is an excellent piece James.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful hit!
Direct
True
When we all see this!
Great work!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Haiku

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well done Poet well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 10, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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