Sunburn

Sunburn

A Poem by James Paulin
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Haiku

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mid-summer picnic sun

lazy day relaxation

red skin screams “aloe!”

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Oh that's a funny last line; it's so true. This so well described a sun-burn and how it comes.

Posted 11 Years Ago
Great Haiku

Posted 14 Years Ago


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 Added on July 14, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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