To Soar

To Soar

A Poem by James Paulin
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Flyku

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ascend on thermals

glide aloft on silent wings

like hawks or eagles

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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This is so wonderful and light!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well said and a fine winning write!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this ;-)

(That's my "fleeview" on your "flyku")

Jane

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haikus!! I tried my first haiku the other day and I was thinking to myself that it wasn't half bad for my first, but this is great! I love it, and it makes me jealous :P

Very fascinating haiku.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations for winning Haiku-7 contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Haiku

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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