Candle Keeper

Candle Keeper

A Poem by James Paulin

One candle in the dark

Bright Message of hope

Reaching out from within

Selfless and kind

A love light

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Keeper’s candle steadfast

Unveils the dark

Visual words felt

I believe in you

A beacon

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Guidance and sight

Look out and in

Two candles in the dark

Go forward remembering

Candle keepers

© 2009 James Paulin


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I'm so glad I read this

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a lovely tribute to your loving sister.....sounds like she's also a great friend!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am glad you won the Footsteps Contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A small flame that represents so much. It signifies the warmth of home and hearth. Sheds it warm glow of love. Beckons to just sit and enjoy the ambiance of the night. Beautifully written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so fantastic, so very honest.
Tell me ...Whose YOUR candle keeper?

Nae-Nae ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and kind of simple, but I really like this. You did a good job and should keep writing pieces such as this.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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