Smile

Smile

A Poem by James Paulin

Rainbows, tulips and daffodils

Springtime blooms, ice gone away

Butterflies, bluebells, a mountain stream

Blue skies, gentle rain, a full moon

Puppies, kittens and chicks

Vistas of beauty, land, air and sea

Sunrise beginnings, sunset finales

Fall brilliance so happy and bright

First snowfall so pure so white

Newborns, weddings and New Years eve

Music in the air, silence if you dare

Cheerios, Oreos and Tootsie rolls

Hot coffee, cold water, iced tea

Cold milk with warm bread and jam

A kiss so tender, a promise to keep

Crisp sheets for the bed

A roof over your head

Moments to rest

Sleep

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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What a wonderful poem! It gives the reader a feeling of happiness and joy! I absolutely loved this creative and beautiful poem! All of the various things made me smile so much and feel so good! Wonderful imagery, details, descriptions, vibe, mood, wording and vocabulary! I really enjoyed reading this! You talked about all of the wonderful things in the world, and making readers feel great and joyous! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this says it all James! so positive!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one! It makes me smile :) I just saw a contest for something like this.... (finding it).... http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/A-few-of-my-Favorite-things./10126/

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful poem! It gives the reader a feeling of happiness and joy! I absolutely loved this creative and beautiful poem! All of the various things made me smile so much and feel so good! Wonderful imagery, details, descriptions, vibe, mood, wording and vocabulary! I really enjoyed reading this! You talked about all of the wonderful things in the world, and making readers feel great and joyous! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you delve into such imagery to awaken one's soul with beautiful thoughts and memories amazing =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderfully inspiring word artistry to the seasons and reasons to live and love life. I even like winter in this poetic work. So upbeat. Surely your poetic pen smiled all the way across the page as you wrote.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem to make us smile. Great Work

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute ...But defenitely something to make most people smile. I like how you changed from describing spring to something totally different, though in a lot of people that might cause a lot of curiosity.
But i loved it, very ...inspiring.

Nae-Nae ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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