Wave of Waves

A Poem by James Paulin

Write a double Etheree using this subjectwaves.

Whitecap

Flags flap high

Baseball bat swing

Hot weather gone by

Oscilloscope reading

Crime growing on the fly

Fields of grain swirling in the wind

Row after row of planes in the sky

Stadium crowd rotate up then sit down

Radio signal beamed from town to town

Shock effect felt in spreading stages

United States Navy female name

Symphony baton rages

Undulating hairdo

Fluttering gauges

Serpentine wall

Blown pages

Sonar

Bye

© 2009 James Paulin

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papaed

You've put it all together here for sure... rhyming, rhythm, a variety of waves, extreme intellectual creativity expressed within a tight criteria. Really enjoyed it. Of course there is one more kind of wave you've missed... I'll just have to write it...LOL
papaed

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.K. (Not Rowling)

Wow. This was really cool. I love how you incorporated so many different possibilites for the word "wave." I also enjoyed your rhyme scheme. This had a great flow to it. Excellent job with the poem!

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tovli

very special etheree. the rhyme was really unusual. awesome. tovli

Posted 6 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lindsay

This was interesting to read, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and subject matter. I loved how you organized this as well, very clever and creative.

Posted 6 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 9, 2009
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James Paulin

Livonia,, MI

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. [more]