Fruition

Fruition

A Poem by James Paulin
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haiku

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Pure love must depart

Gift from the common orchard

Ripe fruit of the heart

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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These gifts from the common orchard are not so common. As if the earth loves us more than we imagine, giving us these fruits of the heart. This haiku is more than beautiful, it is meaningful and gives me more reason to be thankful for the gifts given to us by the green beings of the world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a very sweet haiku. great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent haiku. Perfect example of they are about.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfectly delectable, well done x

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a grand design from the garden of haikus.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These gifts from the common orchard are not so common. As if the earth loves us more than we imagine, giving us these fruits of the heart. This haiku is more than beautiful, it is meaningful and gives me more reason to be thankful for the gifts given to us by the green beings of the world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice Haiku. Good words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is an excellent Haiku. Domo arigatu gozi emas.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of Home!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beuatiful I enjoyed this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 3, 2009
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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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