Oh that's quite beautiful. The last line, just so nicely sums it up. What I love though is that it does make sense and not just some random lines put together to make a haiku. Nice job.
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..
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