Yo-yo

Yo-yo

A Poem by James Paulin
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4 word poem

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string

   f

   l

   i

   n

   g

 spin

thing

© 2010 James Paulin


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This is good! I like the way fling is written vertically. It makes it actually look like a yo-yo! Awesome

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Could you please stop using so many extraneous words in your poems? (hehe)
Very economical and I feel a bit dizzy now..........

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how wonderful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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