White

White

A Poem by James Paulin
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TETRACTYS POEM

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White

 

fresh

formal

forgiven

fundamental

 

immaculate lilies trumpet; rejoice

sanctified seraphim sing in full voice

 

bleach purely bright

blinding light

brilliant

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© 2010 James Paulin


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i love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful Tetracty James. Congrats on another big win for this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats for winning the Tetractys #3 Contest. Great Work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tis the time for Easter Lilies in all their glory.
A fresh crisp White Tetracty.
Thank You!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


An angelic piece........wholesome and clean! :)
Oh, and nicely written too!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fundamental... one of my favourite words and one that should be pulled out on special occasions, such as these. It works. Does it fit in the jigsaw?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

just whites, no yokes?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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