Dandelion

Dandelion

A Poem by James Paulin
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Haiku

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Hooray for yellow!

Pleasantest present of spring

Children always know

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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and delicious in a salad :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on your great winning haiku. This is a wonderful spring haiku!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, Very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good. My kids get so excited when those little flowers show up all over the yard.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll join in your enthusiasm when I stop sneezing uncontrollably! :)

"Pleasantest present of Spring".....a lovely phrase!



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on April 9, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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