Dead Calm

Dead Calm

A Poem by James Paulin
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Haiku

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Absolute stillness

Mirrored clouds rest upon lakes

Stiff air envelops

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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excellent use of the form. You freeze frame a moment

Posted 13 Years Ago
a brilliant haiku which captures the summertime moment perfectly

Posted 13 Years Ago
your words hold the moment so completely
still that I can see it easily. very fine.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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