Ominous

Ominous

A Poem by James Paulin
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Scareku

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Chiller wind cuts sharp

Leaves rustle with withered flesh

Black shapes tingle fears

© 2010 James Paulin


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. wow ... a true spine chiller ...


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i remember as a kid, having to walk under those trees at night

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this is a chilling 5-7-5, good scareku.. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago
Ha, a scareku!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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 Added on September 6, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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