sliced pie

sliced pie

A Poem by James Paulin



economies

are dichotomies

with prosperity

beside poverty.

drastic inequities

generate enemies

from insecurities

 

humanities

incompatibilities

are incongruities

or blasphemies,

defying deities  

generosities

unequivocally


© 2015 James Paulin


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Wonderful use of words! They all fit, all make sense, tell a story...cleverly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there are wisdom in these words. amazing rhyme scheme. succinct. excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

some ideas are hard to divide up but these fews words have done just that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's the primate substrate critically massed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 21, 2012
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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