On the Way

From the passenger seat.

Gazing out of the passenger side window
highway-side countryside rolls past
in still fields of grain
in towering walls of forest
in electrical towers looming above

Like metal giants
conquering each mountain
under their gaunt legs
spinning webs of wire
capturing natural beauty
like flies

Author's Note

I would appreciate criticism, comments, anything.

Reviews

[_mal]

This is lovely, like sitting by and watching. Peaceful