RAY OF LIGHT

RAY OF LIGHT

A Poem by FlawedByDesign
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About a girl I recently met :)

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RAY OF LIGHT

An angel, singled out for her beauty,
Fell into my otherwise empty life,
Gorgeous creature of utmost divinity,
Gracing my seldom elated life.


She’s erased all traces of the corrupt
and turned my life downside up.


My days brim over with heavenly cheer,
She fills my soul with lustrous bliss,
With her by my side, I’ve nothing to fear,
My life is no longer amiss.


© 2010 FlawedByDesign



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FlawedByDesign
A little something about a girl I recently met :)

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Oh man...you know I am a total sucker for this.....very romantic and such a happy and full vibe. I love the feeling of being in love...oh hell, who doesn't really. I just love it more. I really like your shorter pieces, you manage to pack alot in and give it a life size punch to boot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh man...you know I am a total sucker for this.....very romantic and such a happy and full vibe. I love the feeling of being in love...oh hell, who doesn't really. I just love it more. I really like your shorter pieces, you manage to pack alot in and give it a life size punch to boot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww how sweet..."She’s erased all traces of the corrupt
and turned my life downside up." perfect! Did you read this to her? It's bound to make her feel very very special. You explain the way that she has transformed your life graciously.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this. The last stanza was my favorite.

Posted 8 Years Ago


it flows great. nice and simple:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree with snapdragon here,so very sincere is this,and so gentle..it takes a lot of love for a man to write this way..so gentle,so soft and almost divine..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Gorgeous creature of utmost divinity,
Gracing my seldom elated life."
...love the imagery here!
"My days brim over with heavenly cheer,
She fills my soul with lustrous bliss,
With her by my side, I’ve nothing to fear,
My life is no longer amiss."
...this last verse is magnificent!
love this wonderful poetry!!!:-)

james:-)




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful piece, nice flow and rhyme, and my favorite line ...She’s erased all traces of the corrupt and turned my life downside up....



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great. So simple and sincere. It's like you opened up your heart and gave us a short glimpse of what you feel for her. It's brilliant in it's simplicity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Lucky girl, well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awwww :) This is so sweet...I love the two middle lines. Great work here.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 10, 2010
Last Updated on July 11, 2010
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FlawedByDesign
FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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