COLOUR OF LOVE

COLOUR OF LOVE

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

COLOUR OF LOVE

It hides in the majestic morn yellow,
Across sunlit flashes of your sweet face,
In musical portraits of the cello,
Merry atop white clouds in heaven’s grace.


Perhaps it sleeps in fields over yonder,
Hiding amongst cherubs of meadows gold,
Beautifying the air as it wanders,
Exhaled by the flowers as they unfold.


It swims with rainbow fish in mountain streams,
Bathing in the warmth of sun’s lucid smile,
Betwixt the allures of my joyous dreams,
In the grains of sand of faraway isle.


It flees stranger’s grasp by soaring away,
Nestled softly in the winds of the south,
Flourishing the blossoms of a new day,
Scintillating across your luscious mouth.


I may have found the treasure that I seek,
Hiding underneath the sunrise born skies,
Amidst the rose blush of an angel’s cheek,
Colour of love is glowing in your eyes.


© 2010 FlawedByDesign



Author's Note

FlawedByDesign
This was inspired by Abdul Aziz's "Dancing With Her" found here http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/abdulrocks/566811/

Awarded "Best Imagery" in the following contest,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Give-me-love%2C-Or-Give-me-hate.-/11540/

Awarded "Honorable Mention" in the following contest,
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Poetry-of-Color/11673/

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Hello FlawBydesign,

Or Ivan, if I may, I won't go into great detail surrounding this review since I rarely review anything that I have judged or going to judge in my contest. I had my significant other pick out a couple of poems she was interested in reading and I was going to come in behind her and read/review. That's when I realized I had read this once. I would have not reviewed and moved on but that would have been rude.

Now that the useless information you didnt want to know is out of the way, I can see why it won Best Imagery. The words here are magnetic, drawing you in to the poem itself. It is quite beautiful. This is one of those special poems that you know everyone needs to read atleast once. Great Job.

Always,

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Inspired indeed, love the nature quality of this work.
Wonderful craftsmanship!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh a nature lover I see from reading this. This is amazing and wonderful. I enjoyed this write, it is very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good I like this alot it tweaks my interest it is in quatrains that rhyme and are written very well

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello FlawBydesign,

Or Ivan, if I may, I won't go into great detail surrounding this review since I rarely review anything that I have judged or going to judge in my contest. I had my significant other pick out a couple of poems she was interested in reading and I was going to come in behind her and read/review. That's when I realized I had read this once. I would have not reviewed and moved on but that would have been rude.

Now that the useless information you didnt want to know is out of the way, I can see why it won Best Imagery. The words here are magnetic, drawing you in to the poem itself. It is quite beautiful. This is one of those special poems that you know everyone needs to read atleast once. Great Job.

Always,

Matthew

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is very evident from your lines…
That you are a lover of nature…
And a good observer of nature’s colors….
Loved the way you blended…. your this gift…
With the need of your soul….
To love….
And in the form of a poem….
It looks very very beautiful…
Fantastic….


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I knew at once that it must be love, that elusive illusion that keeps us constantly seeking it, even when it surrounds us....

Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really like this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hey, this is beautiful, sir. Not only is it very well written, but it lights a fire in the mind, and gives us something pleasing to look at. I admire this piece of work... Makes me wonder, "what the hell does LL Cool J know about love?" Great work, sir.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very beautiful. nice write:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very very beautiful. The imagery was outstanding I loved it. It was breathtaking

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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