IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

Your fingers tango with my face,
elegant and sweet,
like a muse playing the harp
in heavenly winds.


You trace the outline of my lips
with your tongue,
looking for the resting place
of your kiss.


You guide my gaze through
your breath to rest on your lips,
as the scarlet of your mouth
sings the rhapsody of love
carried on sensual waves
of your heart’s sigh,
arousing my sinful curiosity,
evoking the flirtatious
deviant inside of me.


The whispers of your tongue
are drawing me in,
teasing me to stay;
bewitching me to sleep
on the blanket of your desire.


As your mouth explodes into mine,
it intrigues me.


You bathe in my tears of passion,
inhaling the love from my heart;
enslaving me,
in the whisper of your kiss.


© 2012 FlawedByDesign



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I like not looking ath the profile before whipping a poem into the ol head banks.
I saw a very feminine kick to this. That's not in an offensive way, but the understanding of love in the sex of another is a nice way to expand style.
Usually women focus on lips
we focus on tits

Nice read and well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love 'As your mouth explodes into mine,
it intrigues me.' I agree that kiss... is more than a kiss, it awakens your soul and mind, for a moment the two of you are lost in eternity of passion and intrigue....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH...
I LOVE THIS...
JOB WELL DONE...
=]...

Posted 5 Years Ago


very sensual writing. i like the line " inhaling the love from my heart" shows a sensitivity towards womens feelings. nice imagery

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow this is really spicy. I like it! You have a great gift for these kind of poems. Keep on writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow…
So spicy….
Enjoyed it very much….
A different way of penning down….
The passion…


Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the tracing of the lips, very sensual. Great poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice pacing, nice sensual imagery, very passionate. I'm not sure if 'intrigues' is the best word to use, it seems very droll compared to the rest of the passion and explosions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A amazing poem of love and passion. I like the desire to be touched by a kind woman. A very good ending to a strong poem of emotion and passion. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


such deep and passionate writing here, i thought this was really beautiful and sweet work. the fire of passion sure burns on in this great write.

"You guide my gaze through
your breath to rest on your lips,
as the scarlet of your mouth
sings the rhapsody of love
carried on sensual waves
of your heart’s sigh,
arousing my sinful curiosity,
evoking the flirtatious
deviant inside of me."
now that was just awesome. brilliant writing!


Posted 6 Years Ago



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FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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