Love Is Dangerous

Love Is Dangerous

A Poem by Zoe
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My first haiku.

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A gun to my head,
Keep by his side? I will die,
Move on? Death again.

© 2017 Zoe



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Zoe
Fiction.

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Love the dualism here, Zoe.

What a choice! To stay or go, knowing that taking either path will lead to a death of some sort; either stay and risk a death at violent hands by an abusive person or leave and risk the death of the relationship. Very clever. And a perfect haiku form!

An excellent first attempt. Well Done!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so very much, Doodley! That was a perfect interpretation. Glad you liked it.



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So conflicted! Sad but good.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Zoe

1 Week Ago

Thank you much for your time. I appreciate it!
Love it. The dilemma one goes thru when being in love! :P Nice work!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks, NB! I really appreciate it.
NerdyBeauty

2 Weeks Ago

You're very welcome.:P
Simple and incredible... the haiku poems are usually the strongest because you have to know exactly what you want to get across and say. It was incredible!!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you! Much appreciated
love the clever word play in this...love...fatalistic and dangerous ...yet we continue to desire and pursue it to the end ..i like this one a lot .. as dark a senryu as i have ever read ..good job says i!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you much, Einstein! I really do appreciate it.
You are right Zoe. Love is dangerous. Nice use of words. A entertaining poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much, Coyote. I really appreciate it!
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome Zoe.
Well, That was utterly dangerous and beautiful at the same time

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your time and review!
A good haiku, Zoe. The ying and yang of love. I would say I like that you are experimenting with different poetic forms. That's how you grow. For a first attempt this is good.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much, Ted! Means a lot.
Well done. It's so short, but says so much. Keep it up Zoe.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you much, Avia!
what a situation to be placed in damn if you do ! and damn if you don`t

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Zoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, wordman! I appreciate it.
Thrilling. I love the imagery

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks much for your time and review. Appreciated!

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