People Are Only Seasons

In a world where change is the only constant, where in a flash trust turns into treason. It's all thanks to men, but it's okay then, 'cause darling, people are only seasons. Solemn as rain, furious as heat, or cold, very cold, as snow. Some leave a tan, or a frostbite, oh man! While some leave a beautiful rainbow. Ever-changing and shady in all their ways, such are the creatures gracing this land. From love to hate, oh that's heartbreak, that dilemma; can we ever understand? They come and go, making their presence felt, only few make their absence felt, too. They are the ones, who bring air to your lungs, and you never want to bid them adieu. Sundries of souls you'll meet so be careful, of who you allow in your region. Cause life is a beautiful mess, in which, I guess, people are only seasons...

Author's Note

Exams are round the corner and here I am writing a poem! Just had to get this out, hah.
(By 'men' I mean humans, not just the males).

Reviews

[Wonderland Asylum]

Interesting structure, but I like it.

I love your use of words to show the contrast and similarities between humanity and nature.

" Some leave a tan, or a frostbite, oh man! While some leave a beautiful rainbow."

This is absolutely my favorite lines in this poem. They are beautifully written, along with the rest of the piece.

The word choice is intriguing, and captivating.

This is one of my favorite poems that you have written.
As always, keep writing.

[Zoya]

Thank you much, Cat. I do appreciate :)

[Wonderland Asylum]

Your very welcome

[Vivian Gospel]

Moment you stop depending on people life is so much better. They come and go, insincere people talk sweet and some just dont care no matter how much you want them to. Point is they dont care. Strong writing zoe.

[Zoya]

You are so right, Vivian. After all the mountains we climb, I think it's only fair that we get our 'me-moments', cutting off with the drama and madness of the world and its people. Thank you so much for your comment, really appreciate it :)

[Vivian Gospel]

Well if i were you i would stay away from narcopaths on this site as well. But you cant choose your demons.

[Zoya]

Hmm, well, thank you for that...? But I guess I can take care of myself :)

[Giulia King]

I like the comparison and I like that this is something new and fun to read. I always gravitate towards dark, broken poems. Hope your exams went good x

[Zoya]

Same with me. The sadness in those kind of poems is quite nifty. My exams went well, thank you :)read moreSame with me. The sadness in those kind of poems is quite nifty. My exams went well, thank you :)
I appreciate your time and review!

[yuhee]

Very beautiful. You had wonderfully compared humans and nature.

[Zoya]

Glad you liked it. Thank you :)

[Airafh]

Beautiful poem, glad you clarified in the note below that by men you mean humans :)

[Zoya]

Thank you for the read :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Some are a blessing some a lesson but the right ones will always stay and we need to stop expecting the seasons to change, accept that sunshine can shine daily🌹

[Zoya]

Love your insight! Thanks much for your time and the wonderful review :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Only a pleasure🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and logical use of words and thoughts. I agree. Each life will have many seasons. Your words worthwhile and enjoyable. Thank you Zoe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Zoya]

Thank you for your ever so kind words, Coyote! I really appreciate it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Zoe.

[KCthelastboyscout]

It's amazing how beautiful your imagination is.somewhere inside you is a older and wiser spirit far beyond your young years.absolutely incredible to read

[Zoya]

Thank you, KC! You are appreciated

[Ted Kniffen]

Very good, Zoe. This is a fine illustration of the human condition. People float in and out of our lives constantly.

Grammatically it's not too bad, but there is no need to capitalize words after a comma and the abbreviation of because would be 'cause.
They come and go, making their presence feel (felt), Only few make their absence feel(felt), too.

Your writing is heartfelt and in this case quite philosophical. You do extremely well.

Good luck with your exams.

[Zoya]

Thank you for pointing that out! Actually, in the beginning, I had all the lines starting from a new line, hence I capitalised the first letter. But then I changed the alignment.
Thank you for your time and review, Ted! Really appreciate it!

[olympiuslu]

An overview of humanity in such a short, little poem. Very impressive! I like how human's are reduced to the seasons and how you have made comparisons to their qualities with such a clear eye. An interesting read!

[Zoya]

Thank you very much. Your words are appreciated!