People Are Only Seasons

People Are Only Seasons

A Poem by Zoe

In a world where change is the only constant, where in a flash trust turns into treason. It's all thanks to men, but it's okay then, 'cause darling, people are only seasons.
Solemn as rain, furious as heat, or cold, very cold, as snow. Some leave a tan, or a frostbite, oh man! While some leave a beautiful rainbow.
Ever-changing and shady in all their ways, such are the creatures gracing this land. From love to hate, oh that's heartbreak, that dilemma; can we ever understand?
They come and go, making their presence felt, only few make their absence felt, too. They are the ones, who bring air to your lungs, and you never want to bid them adieu.
Sundies of souls you'll meet so be careful, of who you allow in your region. Cause life is a beautiful mess, in which, I guess, people are only seasons...

© 2018 Zoe



Author's Note

Zoe
Exams are round the corner and here I am writing a poem! Just had to get this out, hah.
(Not being bias here. By 'men' I mean humans, not just the males).

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Interesting structure, but I like it.

I love your use of words to show the contrast and similarities between humanity and nature.

" Some leave a tan, or a frostbite, oh man! While some leave a beautiful rainbow."

This is absolutely my favorite lines in this poem. They are beautifully written, along with the rest of the piece.

The word choice is intriguing, and captivating.

This is one of my favorite poems that you have written.
As always, keep writing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

6 Months Ago

Thank you much, Cat. I do appreciate :)
Emo_Cat

6 Months Ago

Your very welcome



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Moment you stop depending on people life is so much better. They come and go, insincere people talk sweet and some just dont care no matter how much you want them to. Point is they dont care. Strong writing zoe.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

You are so right, Vivian. After all the mountains we climb, I think it's only fair that we get our '.. read more
Vivian Gospel

2 Weeks Ago

Well if i were you i would stay away from narcopaths on this site as well. But you cant choose your .. read more
Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

Hmm, well, thank you for that...? But I guess I can take care of myself :)
I like the comparison and I like that this is something new and fun to read. I always gravitate towards dark, broken poems. Hope your exams went good x

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

5 Months Ago

Same with me. The sadness in those kind of poems is quite nifty. My exams went well, thank you :)read more
Very beautiful. You had wonderfully compared humans and nature.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

5 Months Ago

Glad you liked it. Thank you :)
Beautiful poem, glad you clarified in the note below that by men you mean humans :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the read :)
Interesting structure, but I like it.

I love your use of words to show the contrast and similarities between humanity and nature.

" Some leave a tan, or a frostbite, oh man! While some leave a beautiful rainbow."

This is absolutely my favorite lines in this poem. They are beautifully written, along with the rest of the piece.

The word choice is intriguing, and captivating.

This is one of my favorite poems that you have written.
As always, keep writing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

6 Months Ago

Thank you much, Cat. I do appreciate :)
Emo_Cat

6 Months Ago

Your very welcome
Some are a blessing some a lesson but the right ones will always stay and we need to stop expecting the seasons to change, accept that sunshine can shine daily🌹

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

7 Months Ago

Love your insight! Thanks much for your time and the wonderful review :)
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

7 Months Ago

Only a pleasure🌹
Wonderful and logical use of words and thoughts. I agree. Each life will have many seasons. Your words worthwhile and enjoyable. Thank you Zoe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your ever so kind words, Coyote! I really appreciate it :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Zoe.
It's amazing how beautiful your imagination is.somewhere inside you is a older and wiser spirit far beyond your young years.absolutely incredible to read

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

7 Months Ago

Thank you, KC! You are appreciated
Very good, Zoe. This is a fine illustration of the human condition. People float in and out of our lives constantly.

Grammatically it's not too bad, but there is no need to capitalize words after a comma and the abbreviation of because would be 'cause.
They come and go, making their presence feel (felt), Only few make their absence feel(felt), too.

Your writing is heartfelt and in this case quite philosophical. You do extremely well.

Good luck with your exams.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

8 Months Ago

Thank you for pointing that out! Actually, in the beginning, I had all the lines starting from a new.. read more
An overview of humanity in such a short, little poem. Very impressive! I like how human's are reduced to the seasons and how you have made comparisons to their qualities with such a clear eye. An interesting read!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zoe

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much. Your words are appreciated!

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