Are You Sorry Pretty Baby?

Are You Sorry Pretty Baby?

A Poem by Flow~
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Writing this kind of poetry enables me not to be mean to those who caused me pain. Just venting some negative vibes out.

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I listen to your words with one thing going through my mind
your words paint the perfect picture an innocent victim’s anthem
always an excuse as to why life has forced your hand
putting you into another position to act without a care
 your reasons for slipping off with another man
sounds like a patriotic hymn as soldiers march towards war
 
are you sorry pretty baby for the way you tricked on me?
 
your tears and emotional pain fall silently
on barren lands of my heart that once loved you so
I can’t help but to feel some kind of joy
when I hear you say that you don’t understand
why he doesn’t call or text you anymore
 
 Does the word karma have any meaning to your soul
I whisper from the coldness of my still heart
 
are you sorry pretty baby for the way you tricked on me?
 
I ignore your childish mislead attempts to break me down
so that I slip and make love to you
 
“just one more time, for old time sake
I miss your touch, the way your tongue licked my c**t
the way your dick fit perfectly like it was made
to slide between my legs”
 
your hopes is that I will forget the past
while welcoming you back full force into my life
saving you yet again from another bad decision
solely based on the pulsating throbbing between your legs
 
truth be told I still love you just as much as I ever did
but I murder that love ever chance that I get
spilling it’s spoiled blood all over my skin painting it red
focusing my anger away from hating you to presumptuous  pity
it’s the best feeling I can give to you without making myself choke
 
are you sorry pretty baby for the way you tricked on me?
 
now if you want me take you back
I got to see you down on bended knees
 
only then will I speak the repeating thought that bounces in my head
since you started talking about how sad you are
about the bad decision you made destroying your life
my only thought that I can’t wait to say to you
with all the love that I have remaining in my heart towards you
 
shhhhhh!            Listen Closely!
 
you must be out of your mother f*****g mind if you think
for one moment on all of God’s green earth
that I would ever take you back
in my bed or back in my heart
you must think I am a double fool
for even trying to come back my way
I may still love you, but I don’t like you
or respect you as a woman
and I despise you for not having
an ounce of compassion
 
f**k him and f**k you
 
are you sorry pretty baby, I don’t really give a damn


 

 
 

© 2009 Flow~


Author's Note

Flow~
I was annoyed, angered and repulsed when I wrote this.

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"I was annoyed, angered and repulsed when I wrote this."
I can tell ;) Wow, what a powerful piece. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh honey...ooops and damn good poem my friend! x0x0x0x0x you rock like no other Flow babe! x0x0x0x0x0

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Now that is getting things off your chest!!!

Intense write Sir. Message conveyed loud and clear!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That last line is just perfect.

You write these emotions really well. By the end, I almost felt like someone had cheated on me, and I was a little unhappy with them. (Except for the whole part where that person just doesn't exist for me. Heheh.)

I love the font changes, too, the itallics and the bold and that red especially.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well that was quite the emotional vent..., especially the end... you got to let it out and at least you did in a creative and constructive manner...

I can't understand those who hurt people then blame it on their past, it is a pathetic excuse...

your anger is well justified... and I know how you feel.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing job. THis is filled with so much anger and ahte. Its so powerful
I love it. The emotiuons are so strong. Great job.
Hugs,
Tallulah

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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jen
leaving you a hug honey

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Way to let that steam go!
Simply stated Raw and full of anger.
Such a wonderful rant FLow
Love it, stick to your guns.


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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