Falling in and out of love

This is a songfic.. to the song by Alicia Keys - Fallen. Alicia is one of my all time favorite artist her lyrics, her melody play a tune to my heart that is orgasmic. This is dedication to her talent.

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's all your fault

no matter what you say

I know you will always love me

So chill out before I clock you one

 

Love isn't a game

so stop waisting my time

With your crying and complaining

fix me some dinner and grab me a beer

 

You're only foolish

if you chose to walk away from me

I will have two more women just like you

before the ever walk out that door

 

I think your confused

because you feel love is just a dream

A movie that has a happy ending

Instead of fallen in and out of love

I think it's better

if you just

fall in line

 

flow

 

[Alicia Keys Lyrics for Fallen]

 

(Verse 1)
I keep on fallin'... in--- love with you
Sometimes I love ya, sometimes you make me blue
Sometimes I feel good, At times I feel used
Lovin' you darlin', makes me so confused

[Chorus]
I keep on fallin', in and out of love with you
I never loved someone the way that i'm lovin' you

(Verse 2)
Oh Oh, I.... never felt this way
How do you give me so much pleasure,
cause me so much pain,
'Cause when I
think I'm taking
more than would a fool I start
fallin' back in love with you.

(Chorus)
I keep on fallin', in and out of love witha you
I never loved someone the way that i'm lovin' you

(Bridge)Oh baby
I,I,I,I'm
Fa-a-allin'
I,I,I,I'm
Fa-a-allin'
Fall,fall,fa-a-a-allin'x2

O-o-o-o-oh

(Chorus)
I keep on fallin', in and out of love witha you
I never loved someone the way that i'm lovin' you

I'm fallin', in and out of love witha you
I never loved someone the way that i'm lovin' you

I'm fallin', in and out of love witha you
I never loved someone the way that i'm lovin' you

what.
 

Author's Note

Based on the review I decided to challenge myself and do a complete rewrite

Reviews

[Dawn Jones]

I like what you write a lot but I dont really think it goes well with the song you wrote it for. I think that the singer is talking more about loving someone who mistreats her rather then simply being confused by loving someone who truly loves her in return and would do anything for her. What you had to say is beautiful. They just dont quite fit together.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I will have two more women just like you before the ever walk out that door - I LOVE THIS LINE!
Great write...I don't know the song, so I have no biased opinion! haha Enjoy reading anything you write anyway! ;)

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I love this and am sooooo glad I awarded it third place in my contest