rain

rain

A Poem by forevermore1218
"

I am really bored and all I want is for it to rain right now enjoy :)

"

sitting in my room

the light shines through my window

I look out side and see the sun

but all I want is rain

 

I have nothing to do

I can't go out

nor think about anything else

but all I want is rain

 

the amber tree outside my window

it's leaves shining with gold

It's beauty blinds my eyes

but all I want is rain

 

as I sit here on my bedroom floor

as I hear the birds singing outside

and as I take in a slow, deep breath

I realize how lucky I am

 

but unless there are little droplets on my window

I will forever

                 and ever

                            and always

     want just rain


© 2012 forevermore1218



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I like your imagery! Like your feeding with the feeling of rain, just want rain, it makes you feel good, yeah, this is so relaxing write and i feel the same way.
I like your flow with that "but all I want is rain" in each stanza.
Thanks for sharing..Well done buddy! :D

Posted 11 Months Ago


I feel the same way. I'm sitting here, tired and sleepy, there is nothing more I would like right now, then rain.

I really love this poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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It's raining here where I am, the soft quiet kind. Will save some droplets for you :)

Posted 11 Months Ago



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