Vibrations

Vibrations

A Poem by audrie

I swallowed you
indulged in you
I was drugged in your presence
while you were lying on top of me
peacefully melting into me
I was confused by the vibrations of penetrating and paralyzing love

I'm in complete ecstasy 
nervous because you're next to me
the smoldering feelings of lust and desire
I cannot help it
I want to go higher
my heart is blinded by the caress of your hand
I'm not really sure if you would understand
my lust for you consumes me
If this is false love
it will significantly wound me

© 2014 audrie



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Wow So powerful!
Lust and ecstasy are indeed fantastic, blinding and confusing all at the same time. You describe that perfectly here. Thanks for sharing this!



Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

you're welcome - I appreciate your review - thsy are always exciting to get and makes me feel like m.. read more
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Pax
this felt like a continuation of your "absolutely nothing" on which both had intense longging and passion. very nice...

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Yes, I tend to wright mostly about relationships because they often seem so confusing to me. My poe.. read more
Pax

3 Years Ago

keep it up my friend...
Intimacy and confusion .... primal feelings expressed in most poignant way.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Avinash. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this poem!
OMG, loved this poem. Very creative and beautifully written. Nicely penned my friend.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kaze - I also appreciate you taking the time to read this.
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
Wow nice use of metaphor in each verse :) It was so enchanting poem about love, lust, and a doubt toward love :) I loved it..Great job friend.. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I always think that I would like to work on metaphors because they are soooo.. read more
Lust addiction is a dangerous game, but so very exhilarating !

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

So very true - so very true
Lust and love. A heartbeat apart.
"my lust for you consumes me
If this is false love"
Sometime we are led by the wrong things. Some peaks cannot be maintained. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

That's great to hear - thanks for the review - it's reviews like this that make me want to continue .. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Keep writing. You are amazing. Alive and strong thoughts.
I have felt these kinds of feelings, and you put it very well and passionately. I love your writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review - I'm really glad you liked it - feel free to send me rread request.. read more
I guess that there is always the chance of love being false - It takes courage to enter into relationships but I think that love is worth the chance - thanks for the review

Posted 3 Years Ago


i know i will be wounded, but i'll take it...your love is worth the bleeding.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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